4/13/14 - Army Reserve Officer Gets a Fortune 500 Job That’s Full of !@#$% - A Résumé Success Story from a P.A.T.R.I.O.T.



Brian Amos is a Signal Corps Lieutenant in the United States Army Reserve, a Fortune 500 leader and a P.A.T.R.I.O.T.  Brian used the concepts taught in Signs of a Great Résumé: Veterans Edition to explain and quantify his military experience as a reservist to a write a résumé speaks for itself. 

Below, Brian explains exactly how he wrote a résumé full of !@#$%, the Signs of a Great RésuméUsing the Signs of a Great Résumé is the best way to quantify and explain your military experience so your civilian résumé speaks for itself:

! - Any part of your experience that was “amazing!”
@ - Defining points, places, dates and things in your career
# - Numbers that quantify and prove your past successes
$ - The dollar value of your contributions
% - Figures that easily show growth and results

Veterans and reservists can use !@#$% to describe the technical training, capabilities and experience they bring to the civilian workplace.   They should also tell civilian recruiters “I am a P.A.T.R.I.O.T.”  I’m not just talking about the fact that it’s patriotic for veterans and military families to have served our country.  What I mean is there are core values that are universal to all service members in any branch.   These core values are important for ALL veterans to include on a résumé because they’re important to civilian recruiters.  P.A.T.R.I.O.T. is an acronym I developed to showcase those values:



In any military occupation, veterans who have worn the uniform and carried our nation’s flag have developed these very desirable (and highly employable!) qualities.  Signs of a GreatRésumé: Veterans Edition provides in-depth insight about how to showcase these values on your résumé.  Let’s see how Brian told his recruiter “I am a P.A.T.R.I.O.T.” and landed a fantastic job as a manager at a Fortune 500 company.



Insight from a P.A.T.R.I.O.T. 
Written By Lieutenant Brian Amos, U.S. Army Reserve

The challenge for any soldier when pursuing an occupation in the civilian workplace is communicating to recruiters what exactly your military job entailed and why that makes you a great candidate for a civilian job.  I recently went through this experience and was fortunate enough to secure a job with a major Fortune 500 employer in the hospitality industry.  The key for me was conveying how my leadership skills, values and the strong moral compass I learned as a soldier uniquely equipped me to be a successful leader in the civilian workplace.

How did I convey this message? What is the best model for communicating the value that I bring to the table?  Scott Vedder’s book, Signs of a GreatRésumé: Veterans Editionteaches veterans and reservists how to tell recruiters ‘I am a P.A.T.R.I.O.T.’ and he’s right - I am! And I believe that all members of our armed forces are as well.  Consider the following examples:

“I am Trainable”

All members of the military go through rigorous training throughout their career.  Basic training, technical and tactical training, advanced leadership courses, etc.  When I was pursuing civilian employment, I discovered quickly that it was not enough to list the different training schools that I have attended as a soldier.  I needed to add !@#$% to reflect the specific value that my training could bring to the organization.

“I am a Team Player”

As a prior Soldier, Sailor, Airman or Marine you realize the value of true teamwork.  You understand that rarely anything is accomplished by a group of individuals protecting their own interests.  Your commitment to the team and adaptability as a team player is a tremendous asset that you must leverage as you transition into the civilian workforce.  How do you leverage this asset? How did I leverage this asset?  I used !@#$%, the Signs of a Great Résumé, to highlight my experiences with different units and the various roles I held. Examples include serving as a Recruiting Coordinator, Special Events Officer, Safety Officer and Platoon Leader.  On my résumé I indicated the following specific examples using !@#$%:

Recruiting Coordinator:
·        Planned and coordinated 6 recruiting events bringing in 8 new soldiers

Safety Officer:
·        Assessed risk and implemented safety plans for 5 major training exercises
·        Decreased injuries from previous year by 20%



“I am Accountable”

Your level of accountability increased as soon as you joined our nation’s armed forces.  You were accountable to your leaders, your peers, your subordinates but most of all, your country.  Beyond personnel, you were accountable for equipment and information.  In many cases, the equipment you were accountable for was very expensive and sensitive. Remember all of those painstaking sensitive items checks you conducted?  Of course you do.  Now put that information to use as you pursue a job in the civilian workforce!  Use !@#$% to highlight the personnel and equipment you were accountable for.  On my résumé I indicated the following specific example using !@#$%:

Platoon Leader:
·        Maintained accountability for over $1 million in equipment
·        Planned and coordinated annual training for 30 soldiers
·        Successfully implemented new training program resulting in 30% increase in personnel readiness





Brian’s résumé clearly speaks for itself and he’s got plenty of !@#$% to explain why it’s absolutely true for him to proclaim “I am a P.A.T.R.I.O.T.”  I’m proud to know Brian, grateful for his service and thankful to him for sharing his insight about what makes Signs of a Great Résumé: Veterans Edition the best resource for military veterans, reservists, transitioning service members and their families.


I’ll be sending some free copies of Signs of a Great Résumé:Veterans Edition to Brian’s unit in the Florida Army National Guard at the conclusion of our Indiegogo Campaign.  You can help support the brave men and women of Brian’s platoon and up to 2,000 veterans, transitioning service members and their families by joining and contributing to our Indiegogo campaign at http://igg.me/at/veteranjobs.  Our veterans need and deserve our help finding great civilian jobs.  You can send a personal copy of Signs of a Great Résumé: Veterans Edition to a veteran for as little as $5.  There’s less than two weeks left on the campaign.  Join us today!



For more great insight and free résumé tips for civilians and veterans, visit www.ScottVedder.com.


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